RACES Builder — Build a Strong Evidence-Based Paragraph

Prompt

Reading Passage

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The Midnight Zone Oasis

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Writing Prompt

Analyze how hydrothermal vents support vibrant ecosystems in the deep ocean despite the extreme conditions.

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Missing Pieces

○Restate
○Answer
○Evidence
○Explain
○Sum Up

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I answered the prompt in my own words.
I used the strongest piece of evidence.
I explained how the evidence proves my answer.
My final sentence gives the big idea.

You decide — this is for your own thinking, not a grade.

Step 1: Restate the Prompt

Turn the question into the beginning of your answer.

Flip the prompt into a statement that names the topic. Save your actual answer for the next step — Restate just sets up the sentence.

Sentence Stems (optional starters):

Your Restatement:

Step 2: Answer the Question

Give your direct answer in your own words.

No quotes yet! Just state your claim clearly. The evidence comes next.

Your Answer:

Step 3: Cite Textual Evidence

Choose your one strongest quote.

Pick the single best piece of evidence — or type your own below (your custom evidence will replace the selected quote). Some quotes may be true, but only one best proves your answer.

Evidence from the Passage (pick one): "Hydrothermal vents pierce the Earth's crust, spewing toxic chemicals and mineral-rich water heated to temperatures exceeding 700°F into the freezing sea." "Bacteria perform a process called chemosynthesis. They convert the toxic chemicals directly into usable energy, forming the foundational base of a unique deep-sea food web." "These animals completely rely on the bacteria for nourishment, proving that life can adapt and flourish even in the darkest, most extreme corners of our planet."

Citation Stems (for custom evidence):

Custom Evidence (optional — overrides your selection):

Step 4: Explain Your Evidence — The Most Important Step

Explain how your evidence proves your answer.

This is where the real thinking happens. Don't repeat the quote — explain it.

Don't repeat the quote — explain what it means. Ask yourself:

What does the quote show?
What can you infer from it?
Why does it matter?
How does this prove your answer?

Sentence Stems (optional starters):

Your Explanation (aim for 2–3 sentences):

Step 5: Summarize / Wrap Up

Wrap up your response without just repeating everything.

End strong. Leave your reader with the big idea, not a copy of your first sentence.

Sentence Stems (optional starters):

Your Wrap-Up:

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